The Return of the Indian Lynne Reid Banks

My book is the Return of the Indian and, I don't think it really is credible. Some reasons I don't think is credible is: They are magical toys that come to life, the toys can talk and there is no such thing as magical creatures. The action in my book is done because Patrick brought soliders alive and now they are fighting each other. I think its pretty dumb, its not like the first one at all...